All Comments on 'Summer Turns Into Winter on Halloween'

And then she goes over to Carly's the next day and says I've got something to show you...and pulls out the costume

Fun little sex fantasy. I enjoyed it.

Go through your story and count how many sentences start with "I..." or "My...". Far too many. It seems egotistical and is very boring to read.

Otherwise, your story might have been OK.

Thank you all for the feedback and comments, I appreciate them! -- ❤JulyReve

I wanted to be her! Exploring her new desires further might be fun!

Thanks for your comments! — ❤️JulyReve

Really enjoyed this! It was hot and lots of fun. Great job!

Thank you so much! -- ❤ JulyReve