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by lovelyladyfaire

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NonSequitourNonSequitourover 4 years ago
Hyperbole much?

You really don't need to make up new, over the top, descriptive phrases EVERY sentence. Maybe not even every paragraph...

chad132chad1329 months ago

I love all your stories and this is no exception. You start a slow burn that erupts into a raging fire. Thank you so much for the ride.

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