All Comments on 'Summer Vacation'

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AlwaystabooAlwaystabooover 2 years ago
My cousin teased all her male relatives

I was the youngest so by time I was of age she had perfected her craft. All my and and female cousins couldn't comprehend all her male cousins and uncle fighting to help her with everything.

cageysea9725cageysea9725over 2 years ago

Look up "twinge". If you think you udder it correctly, even once, in this story, then there's nothing anyone can say to help you.

That's not the only abused word here, but it is the most annoying of them.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Please, more

5*

Tc

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

not a huge fan of the story, but 'udder' in the comments was hilarious. I think it is great when someone tries to make a shitty remark and ends up using a wrong word, punctuation, etc

cageysea9725cageysea9725over 2 years ago

I think it's hilariously stupid when people compare a text message to published writing, especially when they can't even bring themselves to reveal a pseudonym for themselves.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Very slow!

JohnnyGaltJohnnyGaltover 2 years ago

Why is this in Incest rather than BDSM?

I mean yeah, cousin, but that isn't the focus of the story, is it?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

WOW, can't wait to read what happened next

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Started off decent, but these stories where characters name drop CFNM ruin the immersion. Feels like product placement lmao.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Excellent first story, another in this series would be quite fine, you have all of the elements in place.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

crap

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