by NurseJim
I wish he came in her mouth - she missed out big time! Otherwise hot, hotter and even sweet. Those were the days.
Very sweet. Wonderful writing. Though I did notice a handful of typos, that's just mechanics. Excellent characterization--his thoughts were so clear and realistic I felt I was there.
this was cute. erotic but still sweet- the characters care about each other. a pleasure to read! (haha.. pun intended?)