All Comments on 'Summerhouse Blues'

Hope you'll be submitting more.

R.

A great story that read well with good characters.

Entertaining read, one of the few authors I'll look for from now on, thanks for writing :)

Good build-up, good character development, good dialogue (except for full stops where commas should be). The mechanics of writing are poor, but the story is so good and Rhonda and Tracey are so real, so who cares? I've got pages of quibbles, but it doesn't really matter. Five, only because I can't give it ten!

wot a brill story.

nice to read a propa british author.

luv it.

keep it up cocka.

Fabulous story! As for the glossary at the end...thanks. Being from the USA I quite enjoy your stories & the lovely terms that are quite different from those in the states. I find it highly enjoyable. But back to the story...it's just another example of your brilliant work!

Could Jack have been any more of an ass? Get it? Jackass?? I NEVER would have let him talk to me that way, EVER!!! Anyway, Rhonda to the rescue! Good for her! I even liked the glossary. I have figured out quite a few after reading several of your stories now. For example, I was pretty sure Tescos was a grocery store. And while I am not as handy as Rhonda is, I'd likely be spending quite a bit of money at Wickes. (I love Home Depot!)

5 stars, as always. :) ~ L

Fantastic story. Except pot noodles aren't for the microwave. Pour on boiling hot water straight from the kettle

I knew what Wickes was. We used to have them in states many years ago and I had no idea they were still a going concern in the UK.

Great story.

You most surly have a talent, and fortunately you generous enough to share it with us. I haven't read Rhonda's version yet it's my next read. I'm giving you 5🌟's.

This story was great. Got to love a kick ass heroine!

happy to see Jack got his from her before the heavies got him...

glossary was nice-I worked with limeys/kiwis/aussies in Bermuda 4 years so knew most exept for the charlie

in American-ese Brazilian as smooth as can be-personally I love natural-all what you imprint on your first time(s)