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by SinderellaSin

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Missy_ReneeMissy_Reneeover 2 years ago

Love, love, LOVE it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I couldn't make much sense of this. Between the improper use of apostrophes, the run-on sentences and the switching back and forth between third person, second person and first person, I was thoroughly confused as to what was going on. Please make use of an editor on your next submission.

SinderellaSinSinderellaSinover 2 years agoAuthor

To the person that mattered in made perfect sense. Yes this was one of my earlier stories that I wrote. Maybe I was going to remaster it to bring it up to date with my latest style of writing. As for an editor I haven't got a clue how to send it to one. So I'll try my best to enjoy my writing and if it gives some pleasure to some people I'll be happy.

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Hi I'm Sinderella but everyone calls me sin. There is a reason. I become an addiction with my lustful stories leading you into temptation. During covid I found a chat site called 321 and a gloryhole and bar. From there a daddy took me under his wing and helped me become the b...