All Comments on 'Summer's Unfinished Business'

by Soazoldman

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

The age-old problem. The inability of far too many I/T authors to restrain themselves from turning it into a harem, thereby completely removing all of the normal heat of such a private relationship.

DaddysgirlflDaddysgirlflover 2 years ago

Phew! Very hot!! Nicely done with the Jacqui twist at the end too. ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

My balls are rolling ready to unload

bshell47bshell47over 2 years ago
Wired story!

Did his Dad rape her ?

How was she a virgin?

Loved the family sex and the Naturlist lifestyle.

Will you add more?

Wildspur55Wildspur55over 2 years ago

I like it, mother helping son come of age. Nice story.

HDblackheartHDblackheartover 2 years ago

Great story but rushed certain parts needed to be longer and more fleshed out like the scene where the MC caught his dad in the bathroom with the girlfriend and what exactly happened so we have more information as to why she is still a Virgin and the sex scenes with mom and her girlfriend those two main sequences should have been their own story in fact this story would be better told from the mothers perspective and be entitled..... Healing my sons heart.... This would be a great title for this because it doesn't restrict story narration

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I really enjoyed writing these stories and reading those from others, Many of my stories are related to my own experiences. My favorite that I wrote is "Slipping." It is, as I commented on it, about a young woman I met years ago who was married to a man, wounded severely in Vi...