All Comments on 'Summoning Apogee'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Language changes

Something you should read more is 17-18th century writings. The language used in the "Journal" is far more contemporary which makes it seem "faked" rather then authentic. I'd suggest letters and newspapers of the times would be an excellent source.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Wow

Wow, this is ridiculously hot. 10/10. 5 stars. A+. Bravo and thank you!

CharlottesFireCharlottesFireover 4 years ago
Enjoyed this

I enjoyed this. I also liked the comic ending

Could there be future adventures with these two?

Could he help her with restoring books? Using older English as "Anonymous"

suggested, I believe would distract from the story. That is just my opinion of one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Wonderful read!

Thank you for this lovely and creative story! Your style of writing makes me feel like I am there.

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