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And with that, his powerful arms ensnared me, his great wings folded tightly around us both, a black veil of potent teleportation magic fell... and we vanished quite completely from the cottage in the forest.
We were gone.
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Author's Note:
Thank you again for all of the incredibly kind comments on my last story. Part of the reason it took me so long to put this next part out was that I didn't want to disappoint any of you! It was a really overwhelming response and it made my silly hobby stop feeling like a daft waste of time and start feeling like something really worthwhile.
I know that this part two isn't perfect, but there came a point when I'd realised I'd been adding, editing and starting all over again on it for basically a year and that the time had come to publish it whatever state it was in. (If this doesn't seem like much writing for a year let me reassure you that it has been far from my only project!)
Our plucky heroine will return... one day, just not soon.
I'll have a different story to tell a little bit sooner.
Much love, Betty x
- COMMENTS
Divway5 months agoI knew from the first couple of chapters this was a good read. It was and I really enjoyed how you created the relationships between you character's.
Please do not worry about the time it takes to finish. I have found most who complain in thier comment posting, do contribute either.
Will be reading and now watching for more Betty_Rage. Thanks again for a very enjoyable read.
Desmereldaabout 6 years agoI really love demon stories anyway, but this one was fun and breezy, with just enough shiver factor to make it hot. Thank you for writing this and sharing it with us.
PhaedraSingularityover 6 years agoThis is really high quality material you have here. Your writing could easily be published I would think. The fantastical element and even the little bit of world-building, and those fleshed out characters... Plus an exciting erotic adventure - very nicely done.
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoWill you post a part 3 to this story? I've been rereading a dozen times already and I am so in love with your writing that I just can't wait.
Anonymousabout 7 years agoFrom one writer to another (not on here but writes erotica all the same), you are a gem, buttercup! Your story was a breath of fresh air to read, paced, lots of descriptive detail, never any of that repetitive vocab some writers tend to fall into when they write. Just sheer brilliance. I also understand the demand for a next chapter to get out to readers, but when you feel like it'll be so hard to top your previous one, never forget to take a step back and realize that even if it'll be a while until that next chapter, the end result will be something wonderfully special. I'm very much in the same boat right now haha. It can be hard but ultimately really rewarding. Take some time for you and your story and you'll have it in time. Once again, dear, fantastic and magical read!
Anonymousover 7 years agoLove this story and the chemistry between the Prince and the witch. Would love to see more of their dynamic in his world. Keep writing sooner and longer chapters. Keep up the great work!
SassyKatz71over 7 years agoSensual and detailed. The scenes were steamy. I enjoy a good story that isn't rushed through in every aspect, or too drawn out. Too bad there isn't a final chapter. I'd love to know what happened after they poofed. Were ancient rules broken? Did they delve deeper into the sexual pool? Nicely written too
Anonymousover 7 years agoBy far one of my favorite sexy fantasy shorts, you do so well with the imagery you use. Keep it coming, please and thank you!
