All Comments on 'Sunbathing'

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FranziskaSissyFranziskaSissyabout 2 years ago

Sounds dangerous in any region of the world to satisfy your needs on a beach, but yeah for sure if the coast is clear the needs or senses, additional connected to the sun and the beach and the ocean, are colliding with the sexual tension ....... So it was not sunbathing better sexbathing

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AliceGeeAliceGeeabout 2 years ago

That was hot, a perfect pick-me-up to start the day. Thank you.

SomaSlaveSomaSlaveabout 2 years ago

This is a model for how to write an erotic short. It's technically well written, very sexy and with a certain je ne sais quoi that moves it to a different level. The moment when the narrator got to experience her partner screaming her orgasm into her mouth was the cherry on top. That's a special moment: thanks for adding it.

MigbirdMigbirdabout 2 years ago

Loved the anonymity, the pace, the sex and the observer’s wink at the end. I so enjoy your prose and your poetry. Thanks for continuing to share your vividly fertile imagination. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Atys70Atys70about 2 years ago

Short but oh so sweet! I think the mom wants in on the action- part 2!!!

CoffeeBooksKinkCoffeeBooksKinkabout 2 years ago

Excellent, well-written short story. I especially enjoyed the descriptive language when the author describes how they go down on each other. It really sets the scene and brings the image of the action to life. Thank-you for sharing this great story!

Wiz1002Wiz1002about 2 years ago

Risky, but the thrill of being seen and the anonymity of unexpected sex provided a great base for a short, arousing story. Excellent writing

stroudlestroudleabout 2 years ago

So sexy and erotic. The risk element added a lot to the eroticism . Brilliant , thank you for sharing

GayKatGayKatabout 2 years ago

:-) Hot And Sexy,,, Yes!

Hallo Bree!

The Black Queen and I have very much enjoyed reading all of your stories, and "Sunbathing", is just as beautifully written, hot and sexy as the others,,, yes!

Thank-You, 5-Stars and 5-Snatch Licking Orgasms!

The Black Queen and Gay Kat..

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I enjoyed reading it, but I have one question

How did the towel that they shared turn into a blanket? Sure would like to know.

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Happily married to my Mistress/wife. I write mainly lesbian stories but I am trying to branch out some. I love to write scenes, not full length stories as I feel they are more intimate. I do sometimes take requests. If you have a lesbian fantasy, email me. :) Update: 7/30/1...