Sunbathing Alternate Ending

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Alternate ending to my story "Sunbathing".
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Part 2 of the 2 part series

Updated 05/06/2023
Created 05/03/2023
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As I stood there, still naked in front of the mirror, I couldn't help but notice how wild my body looked. My skin was flushed with desire, my nipples hard and aching for attention. My hair was disheveled and my lips were swollen and red from biting them in anticipation. I knew what I wanted, and I was willing to take the risk to get it.

I made up my mind and got up in a haze, horny and painfully aroused. I walked across the backyard to Jake's house, my body moving on its own, driven by the desire that had been building inside me all day. As I approached the door, I could feel my heart pounding with excitement and fear.

As I walked across the backyard to Jake's house, my body was on fire with desire. I could feel my slickness between my legs, my nipples hardening against the cool air, and my heart pounding in my chest. When I finally reached his door, I took a deep breath and opened it, finding him sitting there with his erection pointing straight at me. I couldn't help but gasp at the sight of it, taking in its impressive size and girth. It was like nothing I had ever seen before, and I could feel my arousal building with every passing second.

Without a word, I lowered myself to my knees in front of him, my eyes locked onto his throbbing member. I couldn't resist pressing my face up against it, inhaling his heavy scent and savoring the musky aroma of his manhood. As I licked the precum from his shaft, I could feel him growing even harder, his desire for me growing with every passing moment.

I closed my eyes and savored the musky, masculine scent emanating from his body. The warmth of his flesh against my cheek was intoxicating, and I felt a shiver run down my spine as I pressed my lips against the slick, swollen head of his cock. The taste of his precum was salty and musky, and I relished every drop that I licked from his shaft.

As I worked my tongue along the length of his cock, I could feel it throbbing and pulsing in my mouth. I opened my mouth as wide as I could, stretching my lips around his head and taking as much of his thick, veiny shaft into my mouth as possible. I could feel my own arousal building as I sucked and licked him, my own wetness dripping down my thighs and onto the floor.

Jake's breathing grew heavier, and I could feel his hands gripping my head, his fingers tangling in my hair. I knew he was close to the edge, but I wanted to tease him, to make him wait just a little longer. I pulled back slightly, swirling my tongue around the head of his cock before taking him deep into my mouth once again.

I could hear Jake moaning softly, his hips thrusting gently against me as I continued to pleasure him with my mouth. I could feel the heat of his body against mine, and I knew that I was just as aroused as he was. But I didn't want it to end yet. I wanted to keep this moment of desire and anticipation going for as long as possible.

I licked and sucked his balls, enjoying the weight and texture of them in my mouth. They were so heavy and swollen that they barely fit in my mouth. As I continued to worship his balls with my mouth, I felt his cock pulse with pleasure in my hand. I could feel the blood rushing through the thick veins on his shaft, and I made sure to stroke him slowly and deliberately, savoring every inch of his magnificent length. I could barely wrap my fingers around his girth, and I marveled at how small my hand looked in comparison to his massive member.

His balls were so swollen and heavy that I could barely fit them in my mouth, but I still tried to take as much as I could. I licked and sucked on them with fervor, swirling my tongue around the sensitive skin and causing Jake to moan with pleasure. I could feel the tension building in his body, but I didn't want him to cum just yet. I wanted to prolong his pleasure for as long as possible.

With one hand still stroking his shaft, I rolled his balls around my tongue and gently sucked on them, feeling them twitch in my mouth. I used my other hand to tease his perineum, rubbing circles around the sensitive spot and causing him to shudder with pleasure. I could tell he was getting close, but I didn't want him to cum just yet. So I slowed down my movements, taking my time and enjoying the feel of his hard cock in my hand and his heavy sac in my mouth.

I knew I was doing something right, and it only spurred me on further. But as much as I loved pleasuring him, I wanted to feel him inside me.

With a moan, I climbed on top of him, straddling his hips. I positioned myself above his massive length, my hands trembling with anticipation. I slowly begin to lower myself down onto Jake's thick shaft, my hands resting on his chest for support. My body trembled with excitement as I feel the head of his cock press against my wet folds. It takes a moment for me to adjust to his size, but I am determined to take all of him. I continue to lower myself down, inch by inch, feeling him fill me up completely.

"Oh God, you feel so good," I moan, as I finally take him all the way in. I pause for a moment, savoring the feeling of his massive length stretching me to my limits.

"You like that, baby?" Jake grunts, his hands gripping my hips tightly. "You feel so fucking tight."

I nod, unable to form words as I start to move my hips, riding him slowly at first. The sensation of his cock moving inside me is almost too much to bear, sending waves of pleasure coursing through my body. I increase my pace, bouncing up and down on his lap, my hands now gripping his shoulders.

"Yes, yes, yes," I moan, as Jake's hands move to my breasts, squeezing and kneading them roughly. The combination of his cock and his hands on my body is driving me wild.

I continue to ride him, my body moving in a rhythm that feels natural and primal. Sweat beads on my forehead as I feel myself getting closer to the edge.

"Don't stop," I gasp, as Jake's hands move from my breasts to my hips, pulling me down harder onto his cock. "Please don't stop."

I ride Jake slowly, moving my hips in a circular motion, feeling every inch of his massive cock fill me up. His hands gripped my hips tightly, guiding me up and down as I moaned with pleasure. The sensation of him inside me was unlike anything I had ever felt before - so thick, so hard, so powerful. I felt my walls stretch to accommodate him, the feeling of fullness nearly overwhelming. My breasts bounced with every movement, and I could feel his gaze on them, adding to my arousal.

"Fuck, you feel so good," Jake groaned, his voice strained with pleasure. "Keep going, baby. Just like that."

I continued to move, picking up the pace as my own desire built higher and higher. I could feel my body start to tense, my muscles coiling in anticipation of the orgasm that was building inside me. I leaned forward, putting my hands on Jake's chest for support as I rode him harder and faster, the sounds of our bodies slapping together filling the room.

"You're so tight," Jake said, his breathing ragged. "I can feel you squeezing me. Are you close, baby?"

I nodded, my eyes squeezed shut as I focused on the pleasure that was coursing through my body. "Yes, Jake, I'm so close," I gasped.

With one final push, I felt myself topple over the edge, waves of pleasure washing over me as I came hard, my body shaking with the force of it. Jake's hands tightened on my hips as he continued to thrust up into me, his own orgasm building.

"Not yet, Jake," I panted, pulling away slightly and off of his throbbing length. "Let me take care of you."

I leaned forward, my mouth finding his as I kissed him deeply, my hand moving between us to stroke his cock. He groaned into my mouth as I worked him, my hand barely able to wrap around his massive girth. I felt him start to tense, and I pulled away, dropping to my knees in front of him once again.

"Not yet," I repeated, taking him into my mouth once more.

I continued to suck on his length, taking him deeper and deeper into my mouth with each stroke. I used my hand to gently massage his balls, feeling their weight and fullness in my palm. I could feel his body tense beneath me, his breathing becoming heavier and more ragged.

"Not yet," I said again, insistently, pulling back slightly and running my tongue along the underside of his shaft. I could feel the throbbing in his member, the pulsing of his veins against my lips.

I took him back into my mouth, moving my head up and down in a slow and steady rhythm. I could taste the salty sweetness of his precum on my tongue, and the wetness between my legs increased with every passing moment.

I moaned softly as I continued to work him with my mouth and hand, feeling his body respond to my touch. His hips began to move in time with my movements, pushing his length deeper into my mouth.

I could feel my own arousal building with each passing moment, the heat and desire coursing through my body like wildfire. I was lost in the moment, lost in the pleasure of giving and receiving pleasure.

Finally, after what felt like an eternity, I pulled away, looking up at him with desire and hunger in my eyes. "I want you inside me again," I whispered, my voice husky with desire.

He grinned, pulling me close and kissing me deeply. "Then let's make it happen," he said, pushing me back onto the bed and positioning himself between my legs.

I moaned as he positioned himself between my legs, feeling his hard length press against my dripping wetness. He leaned down, kissing me deeply as his hands roamed over my body, exploring every inch. I arched my back, pressing my breasts against his chest as he kissed his way down my body, pausing to take each nipple in his mouth and suck gently.

He continued kissing down my body until he reached my core. I gasped as he flicked his tongue over my clit, sending jolts of pleasure through my body. He continued to tease me, flicking his tongue back and forth before he plunged it deep inside me, making me moan loudly. His hands held my thighs apart as he continued to lick and suck, driving me closer and closer to the edge.

I could feel myself getting closer and closer to orgasm, my body tensing as the pleasure built inside me. Jake sensed it too, and he pulled back, positioning himself at my entrance. He slowly pushed into me, inch by inch, and I could feel myself stretching to accommodate his massive size. I moaned as he filled me completely, my walls gripping him tightly as he began to move.

He started out slow, rocking his hips back and forth, but soon he picked up the pace, thrusting into me harder and harder. I matched his rhythm, moving my hips in time with his, meeting him thrust for thrust. Sweat beaded on our bodies as we moved together, lost in a haze of pleasure and desire.

We continued like this for what felt like hours, our bodies slick with sweat as we moved together in perfect harmony. Jake's hands found my breasts, and he squeezed them tightly as he continued to move inside me. I arched my back, pushing my chest out towards him as I moaned his name. He grinned down at me, his eyes dark with desire as he continued to move.

The pleasure was almost too much to bear, and I could feel my body starting to tense up. "Jake," I gasped out, "I'm going to... I'm going to..."

He nodded, understanding what I needed, and his movements became more urgent. With one final thrust, I felt the tension inside me snap, and I cried out in pleasure as my body convulsed around him.

As Jake's body tensed, I could feel the muscles in his thighs and stomach tightening. His breathing became ragged and erratic as he pumped faster and harder inside of me. I could feel the heat building in my own body as my walls tried to grip and milk him. Suddenly, he let out a deep growl, and I could feel him swelling inside me, his cock throbbing as he released his hot cum deep within me.

The sensation was incredible - I could feel every pulsation of his cock as it throbbed and twitched inside me, filling me with his seed. The warmth of his cum spread throughout my body, sending shivers down my spine. I moaned loudly, my body convulsing as I came hard around him, my walls clenching and releasing as he continued to empty himself into me.

As he finally stopped moving, he collapsed onto me, panting heavily. I could feel the weight of his body on top of me, his sweaty skin pressed against mine. We lay there, tangled up in each other, as we caught our breath and came down from the intense pleasure of our shared orgasm.

After Jake's intense orgasm, he laid back on the floor, panting heavily. I rolled over to him, running my hand over his chest and kissing him softly. He smiled at me and pulled me in for another deep kiss.

"That was amazing," he whispered, his hand tracing lazy circles on my back. "You're incredible."

I grinned at him, feeling a sense of pride at having given him such pleasure. "You're pretty incredible yourself," I replied, reaching down to stroke his still semi-hard shaft.

Jake shivered under my touch, and I knew I wanted to spend some more time with him. I eagerly took Jake's semi-erect cock into my mouth and started cleaning him up. I used my tongue to lick every inch of his length, tasting the remnants of his arousal mixed with my own juices. I paid special attention to the sensitive head, swirling my tongue around it and flicking it with the tip. I could feel his body responding to my touch, his breathing becoming heavier and his muscles tensing.

As I continued to clean him, I savored the feel of his velvety skin against my lips and tongue. I could feel the texture of his veins as I traced them with my tongue, relishing the sensation of his pulsing, engorged shaft in my mouth. With each lick and kiss, his length grew harder and longer, and I could feel my own desire starting to rise again.

After several minutes of devoted cleaning, I finally pulled away, looking up at Jake with a contented smile. He looked down at me with a mixture of gratitude and desire in his eyes, and we both knew that we had shared something incredibly intense and special.

We said our goodnights, and I made my way back home, still feeling the throbbing ache of desire between my legs. As I lay in bed, replaying the events of the day in my mind, I couldn't help but wonder what tomorrow would bring. But for now, I was content to bask in the afterglow of our wild and passionate encounter.

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AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Non sequitur.

Senseless jumble.

Only rection was "Hunh?"

Other than that, just another grim reminder - it's not a matter of "if", but "when".

Anybody remember the parable of Eve in the Garden of Eden seduced by the Snake to bite the apple of knowledge?

The difference here, is she hasn't learned anything except being the evil, cheating, lying, whoring, "open for business" crotch gash. And to hell with hubby.

Anyone remember the 10th Commandmnet? Thou shalt not covet your neighbour's wife.

Firstly, a prohibition against lustful desire for your neighbour's wife and to indulge in extramarital fornication.

But equally important, it is a Warning and a Directive for husbands to be eternally vigilant and prepare against men who will attempt to seduce, even rape, extort your wife and/or daughters into illicit sex; and equally it is a Warning and a Directive for husbands to be eternally vigilant and prepare against your own wife's treachery, lies, manipulations in enticing, seducing and submitting to illicit sex with other men.

It is not enough to pray and yourself mind the Commandments. You have to prepare to protect and defend against the rapacious nature of wives and other men - neighbours. Anticipate, expect, observe, verify, build fences, alarms, surreptitious cameras, spies. And realize and fervently adopt the knowledge and stance that it is never a matter of "if", but "when".

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Hot detailed sex, but this and the first part have no real build up or plot; like surfing porn and watching random scenes. That’s not a bad thing, but as a story it could be so much more.

LIDiverLIDiver7 months ago

So hot but there are distractions in the writing. You’re a talented writer but definitely need some polishing. I edit others’ stories and could help you if you’d like.

yarnspinnerryarnspinnerr8 months ago

Hot Hot Sex!

But again I found a couple things that didn't fit.

When she walked into the house and found him sitting there naked, i pictured them in his kitchen.

The suddenly they were on his bed. Is the bed on the 1st floor? When he mentioned earlier that he had an upstairs?

And when they were done, he rolled over onto the floor, no longer in bed.

I hate to nit pick, but please try to avoid these types of mistakes in the future, it will make your stories much better to read.

I want to focus on the Hot Sex! ;->

Buster2UBuster2U12 months ago

Whoa! Great Writing, Great Story, Great Effort. 5 big Blazing Stars. However, it is still just a cheating wife story, regardless of how hot it is. People cheat all the time, Hearts are broken every day. Good reading, How many of my old girl friends or wives could this be the story of . LOL All of them, probably. Thanks Good Job on this story. Buster2U

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