All Comments on 'Sunday Afternoon Delight'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Not Bad

Nice lead up to the ultimate act. Just needs a little more proofreading and better description of Raine's orgasm.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Outstanding !!!

Keep up the good work !!

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