All Comments on 'Sunday Morning'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
well written

I liked it: 5 stars

Droid121Droid121almost 5 years ago
A true delight

A great use of reluctance and force that leads to pleasure for both parties without falling down the rape hole. I hope to see more like this. Or even a sequel would not be unwanted.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Left me shaking!

I would love to experience this in person! Loved the detail!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
I liked this, but...

Not the missing details. How old are your characters? What do they look like? Are they married or just dating? I get that this is just a straight-up sex story, but I feel details like that - even in stroke stories - should be mentioned or fleshed out stronger.

Otherwise, I really enjoyed your writing. And I don't say that often about stories that last one page.

Well done

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