by LookingGlassLicker
A great use of reluctance and force that leads to pleasure for both parties without falling down the rape hole. I hope to see more like this. Or even a sequel would not be unwanted.
I would love to experience this in person! Loved the detail!
Not the missing details. How old are your characters? What do they look like? Are they married or just dating? I get that this is just a straight-up sex story, but I feel details like that - even in stroke stories - should be mentioned or fleshed out stronger.
Otherwise, I really enjoyed your writing. And I don't say that often about stories that last one page.
Well done