All Comments on 'Sunday Night Special'

This story was fire

This piece was OK but the grammar was terrible. Please use an editor. Or not write in 16 year old language.

Edit and expand your storyline. Looking forward to future submissions. Thanks for sharing.

I looked the sorry. Needed some editing but most good stories do. Keep writing.

The sex was okay, but why did she have to be living in a shelter? It doesn't add anything to the story at all and just reinforces negative stereotypes. She could just as easily have lusted after him after seeing him date her daughter, and come up with a ruse to get with him.

Seriously, she's at the store buying shit and living at a shelter? I hope the guy has his doctor or the clinic on speed dial. He's gonna need a couple shots for what else she gave him.

I think the author is more interested in himself and his hummer than the female in the story.

LIVING IN A SHELTER

It free, you work and have to be in for a certain time, there are many shelters that house only women especially if the have been abused. Men don't think of this because they think why is she shopping ... but I think it said she was grabbing sodas. What city did she live in because if all the about is true she can't afford a place on her own.