All Comments on 'Sunderland Magic Ch. 06'

All I ask is for more and longer chapters.

Very nice writing. Continue, good sir/ma'am!

PLEASE PLEASE continue it loved the way its playing out so far. jayde

loving A/B - I'm hoping he comes clean w. her soon; I'm intrigued about his role in all of this! and it seems like something odd is going on w/ the father too. Please update!!

How could you leave us hanging for so long? Please write more, it's so good!

The plot is excellent, but there are some grammar mistakes and typos that could use cleaning up. See if you can find yourself an editor just to 'dust off the cobwebs' for you. Amazing!

WOW, I just found this story and read all six chapters in a row, I hope that a new chapter will be coming real soon! I'm bookmarking this so I can find it again. Its quite different than the usual stories and its written pretty nicely. So looking forward to more.

I'm really enjoying the story thus far! Thanks!

I, too, just read all 6 chapters in a row. Absolutely great... please continue it soon! I'm hooked! :)

I hope you finish this series as I'm enjoying it very much. But wouldn't it be better suited to Sci-fi/Fantasy? Being Sunderland and Non-human I thought it was going to be about Mackems. :-P

I just read all six and they are awesome keep them coming

I just discovered this story and I read all six chapters in a row, and I can't wait for more!

Thanks!