All Comments on 'Sunny's Surprise Exam'

A great story. Very hoy, very sexy. Just the right length.

One of the better stories on Literotica. Clever ending made me smile. Well done.

The story itself is fine, but you have a lot of grammar issues. You use the word, "your" when you mean "you're", for example:

"Ah, there you are. Follow me please. Looks like your hear for your checkup. And your a part of the study too" the nurse said.

It should read as follows, "Ah, there you are. Follow me please. Looks like you're here for your checkup. And you're a part of the study too," the nurse said.

If you can find an editor, your story would be much improved.

Overall, good job. Good luck with the editing on your next story.

A wonderfully different style and adorably tounge-in-cheek. Made me giggle and drop my pants.

Favorite story on here to date