All Comments on 'Sunshine's Confession'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
W.T.F.

Fucked up ya,hot,not for me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Nice story, poor W.T.F. I know he's all fucked up!

Great work.

cheesy80scheesy80sover 16 years ago
Really good story

That's kinda unique to tell an erotic story within an erotic story. Her recounting the sexual encounter was just as hot as the sex she was having...very creative.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Not bad

I'm really into incest stories, but have to say the fact that she'd been cheating on her husband while her brother has been cheating on his fiance takes alot of the fun out of the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
If

She's not Carlsbad Caverns now, she will be by the time she's 30!!!

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Creative writing major in college. Made a career as a history teacher. My high school English teacher once told me that, should I ever encounter writer's block, try writing a pornographic scene. She said "a love scene," but I knew what she meant.

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