All Comments on 'Super Bowl Hangover'

5 Stars! Well done! I could just imagine the wheels going around in his head as he put two and two together.

He has options. Divorce is only one of them

Well done.

There has to be a follow up to this one. It might be a first for LW with this twist. We have seen it with ever combo but this. A guy having his sister take his wife? Hope you do it and label it as a follow up to this or a pt.2.

Gay or straight, divorce is an excellent option.

+Put de lime in de coconut, drink 'em bot' down...

Sorry to correct you but as a Brit I can tell you that the phrase is “blue arsed fly” and NOT flea!

When he heard his wife saying "Oh yes, oh yes!" that his wife always said when she was cumming... Why the hell didn't he immediately put his shoulder to the door and check it out? She might have been getting raped! At least he would then know if she was alone, or with someone. Now he's just in the dark because the video tape proves NOTHING and he'll never know unless he confronts the three and hopes one of them "cracks". What a dumbass.

FYI. Its "blue arsed fly" not flea. LOL. Cheers.

First off it is blue arsed fly.

So he is so mentally weak he can't open the bedroom door to find out.

He then can't talk about it.

As he is so weak willed he should just stay as he is, I mean, he obviously doesn't have the mental strength to do anything else.

He didn't open the bedroom door? He didn't confront her? Even after a second incident? WTF!

strange he did not see that when it occurred and take care of it at the first party.

1 star - What a useless wimp.

Why didn't he just kick his bedroom door open?

It would have exposed the cheating SLUT right there and then.

ONCE&DONE

Divorce the skanky SLUT and move on.

His wife fucked someone and he promptly forgot it... If you say so...

Well done.

Good start, need more development and a better finish. Left hanging for more. 3*

Divorce of course

I do like quick stories when well done. This one was okay, but left too many questions dangling for me to enjoy. I realize flash stories don't tie every loose end, but this one really left a lot out. Maybe less writing about the food & snacks and more writing about story development? Just trying to pin down what was missing.

No story no concl

Good short story. I’m thinking his sister also likes his wife too?

Thanks for sharing.

At least they kept it in the family, and no condoms either!!!!

Yes, divorce is an excellent option. The correct one. She cheated, doesn't matter with who. Time to cut losses.

Be OK if he fancies his sister.

JoeBBN hit the nail on the head. Though it was a good but quick story, just way too many holes in it, there are lots of questions. This story would benefit with another deeper chapter. Divorce is the correct response.

And that’s it?

No, forcing the bedroom door open was the only option

The story is woefully incomplete and not very clear.

My wife like to watch me suck off the men. I'm their grateful half-time entertainment. It gives me the much needed opportunity to be the gay man I've become.

He was the victim of a blue-tail fly!

4

How stupid can a story be..oohh let me think. He hears his wife having sex in their bedroom and he walks away back to the party? hhmm then he pushes it to the back of his mind and forgets about it for two weeks..need anything more be said about this being an unbelievably dumb story. ...2stars..JZK

Divorce is the only play, if you’re a man.