All Comments on 'Super Friends With Benefits'

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Boyd PercyBoyd Percyover 2 years ago

A whole lot more is going on in those dress ups than just wearing costumes!

5

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57over 2 years ago

Loved it! Very fucking hot! Five stars and a favorite point!

topofthehamtopofthehamover 2 years ago

I really really hope you continue with these 3 fun loving characters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

My only complaint is that when you got to the actual sex we didn’t get much of it at all.

DarkSmithDarkSmithover 2 years ago

Please. Let this be the start of a series!

5* & Favorited

LegendMNLegendMNover 2 years ago

Is that how it really ended?

Sparks722Sparks722over 2 years ago

You freaking nailed the description of Dragon Con and the shenanigans- well done! Looking forward to seeing what other regional cons they all end up at next!

BocjBocjover 2 years ago

I enjoyed this story. It had a great set up—but then there was so little payoff. I wish we’d gotten a better, longer, hotter description of the long-promised threesome.

amritaloveramritaloverover 2 years ago

Great Story. More, Please!

dlj403dlj403over 2 years ago

4* because the story just sort of ends. It feels like you missed a page in there because you're usually so much better at that

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I hope it is the start of a series! *****

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I'm with Bocj. Great seduction, but the sex, once it happened, was pretty perfunctory. Of course, that's because the narrator was drunk - I guess that's why you had Alex get her drunk in the first place. The problem is, what I was really hoping for was Stacey's reactions to all her new adventures, in detail. I see that there's already a Ch. 02. But that will be Stacey's second time; it won't be new for her :-(

4*

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

If the “cons” had any sense at all, they would buy this story and use it as advertisement for any and all upcoming events. All those people who think it is just for losers and geeks might change their minds although it would become even more insanely crowded and I hear it is hard enough to find a room unless you book at least a year in advance. Just a thought.

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2/12/22 All 10 parts of "Super Friends With Benefits" have now been posted. This has been an interesting story to write. I started this as a stroke story with a little bit of a new angle I haven’t written before, but then a love story broke out. Along the way, I chose to ...

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