by HLD
A whole lot more is going on in those dress ups than just wearing costumes!
5
My only complaint is that when you got to the actual sex we didn’t get much of it at all.
You freaking nailed the description of Dragon Con and the shenanigans- well done! Looking forward to seeing what other regional cons they all end up at next!
I enjoyed this story. It had a great set up—but then there was so little payoff. I wish we’d gotten a better, longer, hotter description of the long-promised threesome.
4* because the story just sort of ends. It feels like you missed a page in there because you're usually so much better at that
I'm with Bocj. Great seduction, but the sex, once it happened, was pretty perfunctory. Of course, that's because the narrator was drunk - I guess that's why you had Alex get her drunk in the first place. The problem is, what I was really hoping for was Stacey's reactions to all her new adventures, in detail. I see that there's already a Ch. 02. But that will be Stacey's second time; it won't be new for her :-(
4*
If the “cons” had any sense at all, they would buy this story and use it as advertisement for any and all upcoming events. All those people who think it is just for losers and geeks might change their minds although it would become even more insanely crowded and I hear it is hard enough to find a room unless you book at least a year in advance. Just a thought.