All Comments on 'Super Hero Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Umm ok

Ok well its a good story but it has nothing to do with crossdressing or transexuals care to explain

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
I see where this is going

clearly she's preparing him for that one part of her anatomy that has yet to be mentioned... lucky guy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Ok so

I mean obviously it's building up to the "reveal" but its not a good idea to do it this way, people are just going to get frustrated that its two stories into the series and still has nothing to do with the category. A better way would have been to put all these into one story so people know if they keep reading they'll actually get to the point, and not have to wait who knows how long to get to the nature of the story. Just my two cents..

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Chill out

If you people don't like a well developed story, go somewhere else. The category tells you what's going to happen ultimately. Freaking relax! There are plenty one page stories that get right to the point. Go read those.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Let's have more

It's awesome I love it!

BreakMeInGentlyBreakMeInGentlyover 12 years ago
hooked...

...great stuff. can't wait for the next chapter...

heyrockyheyrocky12 months ago

Very sensual and sexy. It appeals to the cock craving nymph in all of us

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