All Comments on 'Supergirl's Night Out'

The story is full of potential and should get a higher score. Problems are throughout the text. Errors abound and, I believe most would have surfaced with an out loud proof reading. Perhaps an editor could locate many as well, new eyes and all. BTW, the past tense of thrust in an intimate situation could well be thrust; as in he thrust into me for what seemed to be eternal euphoria.

Not bad but needs some editing.

So terry and his brother both didn't care that Kylie was a guy?

This story makes me so hot. I can’t wait to hear what Kylie does next!