All Comments on 'Superstitions Ch. 12'

Although I liked your story, it leaves me a bit sad. Probably because those two are avoiding each other. That does say something about your writing skills!

Well done.

Oh man, I have some serious catching up to do!!!!

That story is HOT!!!!! ;-)

ok umm i dont think i get this.. i lovvvved your chapter it was the first i read and then wanted more.. looked for chapter 13 and it was like a compleately different story...? am i missing something?

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