All Comments on 'Suprise Threesome'

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Tim413Tim413about 10 years ago
Well done!

Did Lou get to fuck Sally?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Good, but

Good story but could use some proof reading. At least 2 times the main character referred to herself by name instead of as "I"

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