All Comments on 'Sure, Money Helps'

by Paris Waterman

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
oops...

I came everywhere

H.H.MorantH.H.Morantalmost 13 years ago
Great fantasy

Maybe it would work out that way - or maybe the girls would get pissed off when they realized they'd been had figuratively as well as literally, called the cops, and wouldn't even have to lie to make out a case of false imprisonment (threat of dumping them in an industrial district far from home) kidnapping maybe, rape, maybe (coercion persuaded the girls to sell it - although what they were selling kept changing)

The old lawyer in me wishes I still did criminal defense and an asshole like Palo called me from the jail, and told me exactly what the author has told us, and that the police had not been amused, and would I represent him, please?

I always wanted a Porsche, and the quarter million dollars that went with it would pay the taxes, the insurance, and all that for as long as I wanted it

That ought to be the subject of the sequel - and the installment after that would be how Palo came to have the mirror image "American Standard" impressed on this forehead (hint - it comes from being bent over a toilet bowl while being anally raped) Or maybe that would happen while Palo was trying to make bail

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