by Surefoot
This is a powerful enemy the Commodore has made. I am more scared for him and his family than in any other hapter you have given us. This man's lack of anything decent makes me shudder.
Brilliant, as usual. The level of insight into the minds of all those people is staggering. You're either a 300-year-old wise Chinese holy man (Idk why it has to be Chinese and a man, I just go with it), or a prof. dr. psych.
This series is *literally* in my Top Five on this site.
I always love figuring out the references to the different Sci-Fi and Pop culture items in the story. I am sure it is no coincidence then that I am picturing a young blonde Christophe Walken as Zorin. Well done.
Another great chapter! I love the weaving of all the different characters and familiar characters, but the addition of this new villain. Hrelle always makes me LOL at times when you do not expect comic relief.