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This is so poorly written I could not read past the first few sentences.

Please do us and yourself a favor and delete this garbage!

So there a few mistake this is not garbage and if you are not a writer and try and understand what the writer is saying then maybe you just can't read!!

and an editor could be very helpful...

so you are deceased. how does being dead work in this story???

I cannot understand what the point of the story is. It might help if you had an editor. However, kudos to you for throwing out a story.