All Comments on 'Surprise Femdom Next-door'

sorry this story is just bad

bad grammar, bad storytelling, bad logic

I'm sorry you feel that way about it. It's only my second attempt so I hope to improve. Thanks

Keep writing to improve your talent. Practice makes the perfect storyteller.

The story was not bad for but flushing the key to the chastity cage down the toilet. That is too far. 3 of 5 stars

1 - Guy fantasizes about girl

2 - Guy gets into girl's bedroom

3 - Girl catches guy with her dirty underwear

4 - Girl dominates guy

It's predictable and boring.,,

Ignore, just ignore. It's like reading the very worst of YouTube comments.

The same story line retold in new ways are not a valid complaimt, there are so many successful retelling of fiction that it is funny anyone even dreams of using it as a complaint.

waiting for the next part.

Number one she has nothing to prove he did anything wrong. And if she wants to get out of line, go to the police and show them the toy cage. You know it's illegal to lock someone in a cage, right? So she's going to prison. But forget that. Go home and remove the cage. A pair of pliers or a screwdriver goes the trick. The cage is a toy you idiot. You don't need the key to remove it. The next time she threatens you tell her if she gets in your face your sending her to the hospital. Stupid bitch, stupid story.

I like the ending. Keep writing my friend.

Loved every single word of this story!!! Looking forward to reading the next chapters!!

Thank you ;)