by Catbit20
Ok but how many times do you need to mention the word shaved? We get it after the first couple of times. Annoying.
TomCarol143, sorry about using the word "shaved" too much. I guess it's a trigger word that makes me horny. Sorry about that.
Not into t g e CD thing, but liked the bi action, dedpite it taking 2 pages to describe. Gotta 2nd Catbits crit. 21 times is a bit overkill. Im sure you’ll do better with forthcoming works
Thanks for the constructive criticism. Yes, I'll try to better in the future. I need to be mid-level horny and not ravenously horny when I try to write. LOL!