All Comments on 'Surprise Swap in the Garage'

What those 3 did could be considered crime, unconsensual sex, almost rape...Will he come clean with his wife before he goes cheating on her? Let's wait and see...2* for now

Only a simpleton would imagine this sort of deception is OK.

This was a bunch of fun to read, although it got a bit convoluted trying to figure out who's what is where. It'll be fun to see where you go with this. It has to have a Ch 2 or even Ch 3. You're leaving us hanging here.

What she was thinking ();()

Is that all involved seemed to have the combined IQ of a squirrel. Their words and actions made them dumber than stumps. Which, in turn, made this whole story feel like garbage. Not good. Not good at all.

1 star.

this was all over the place, it was not clear how he could see his sister in law when he was in the garage and she was in the house. Then although he left his wife effectively topless, his brother yhen came and undid her top. Then out of thin air, another dude called Mitch makes a one off appearance.

Try reading the story back before publishing it.

For this type of scenario, this is about as good as it gets. 5 stars.