All Comments on 'Surprise Visit'

I think you could develop this into a full story.. between the two characters. i think it is great. they have passion and you write well. i think you should continue with this story!

Awww, thankyou

I really don't know how I would continue it though--I thought this would be a one time thing--but I might try to continue it after I graduate from school. Only two weeks left ;P

Also--haha-I just realized I left in mistakes