All Comments on 'Surrender at Loon Lake'

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I enjoyed the peek into the woman's mind & her gradual sexual awakening.

Absolutely fantastic

This is a wonderful story! It is very well written, the charachters are likable and beleivable, and the sex is exciting!

Great job!

Powerful, erotic, excellent writing. Very impressive.

Wonderful imagery and emotion. Mom has done it again. What a fine read!

Really, you have six kids??? Very well written, I loved it.

You and the characters in your stories are very close to home. I felt all the emotions you so brilliantly brought out in your four stories. Please let's have some more. Strange but I have also written four stores for Leterotica. Love Rosehip

A Great read! Being in your age group, we both feel the emotion of your female character. Keep it up...we're hooked!

Terrific awakening story (as are the rest of yours). I LOVE your writing. As a 50something, I relate. In fact, I've tried to write from a woman's perspective, or at least understanding hers. Would you read my stuff here? I write under agedmac

Keep writing!

Your depiction of their initial lovemaking was so incredibly hot and erotic, written from her perspective. I loved it! I'm glad she decided to throw caution to the wind and just enjoy herself!

This story and its sequel, "An End To Loneliness" are two of my most favorite, if not downright favorite stories I've read on this site. There was something so moving about Sandra's struggle to let herself go and be vulnerable with another human being. Somehow the ordinariness of this average, repressed woman made it that much more erotic when she finally surrendered herself fully to Jerry. Both of these stories turned me on AND made me cry. Powerful stuff indeed. I FERVENTLY hope this isn't the last we'll hear from these two characters; I was so disappointed that there weren't more stories continuing this plot line. You have a real gift for storytelling and I hope you keep sharing your talent with us. Thank you.

nicely told-hot sex-good story thanks

Thank you so much for this intelligent and sensative (and incredibly erotic) story. As an older woman that has spent her entire adult life being a wife and mother, I share this fantasy of being able to step outside of myself and allow myself to just be a woman that is full of passion and is unaffraid to embrace unbridaled love. God bless you, dear.

So believable and acceptable. It s wonderful the way You surrendered to the moment. Wonderful. I will red more of your stories. I love woman in there forties.

Thank you for this incredibly erotic story. Your storytelling was so beautifully done that I was just swept away. I feel privledged to have witnessed Sandra's complete surrender to her young lover. You have quite a gift.

is an arrogant asshole.