All Comments on 'Surrendering to Our Desires'

very good story.

The slow build to Sean being submissive to her need was excellent.

Only one thing, you slipped from 1st to third and then back to 1st person near the beginning of the second pate.

Quite queer.

Another worthless black/white bullshit story. Ever notice how much that Jamal guy gets around?

It's always a Jamal, I've never come across that name on anyone I have ever met. Is it to emphasise he is black?

I love this story. My wife and I share a love for BBC, and this story describes how the itch develops into a desire and then an addiction!

Great story, please continue, your writing is perfect.

Thank you! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I thought the story was a predictable interracial tale, but still fun. That said, the style made it difficult to read. You should write mostly in active voice. Instead, you wrote way too much in passive voice. Too much passive voice makes reading uncomfortable.

Wonderfully written tale. I can't wait to see where it goes from here.

and I love all three of your stories. I suggest you continue this one - I need to know what happens next to Sean and to Jessica.

I suggest you ask someone to proofread for you. We all make typos sometimes. I enjoy stories about "straight" men who get bent over and go gay. I'm double-hard if their sexual humiliation is witnessed by others - spouse, family, friends, coworkers.

You might enjoy one of my stories.

Donald

My stories:https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=789392&page=submissions

I made sperm whilst reading this.

Great story. Really hot and turned me on so much.

Please continue. I can't wait to read not only about the wife getting fucked by the young men but also Sean sucking James' cock and getting fucked by him deep and hard. I cant' wait.

no the Jessica in the story is one worthless motherfucker who should be set on fire and if i had a girl friend like that i would most certainly throw gasoline on her and set her ass on fire and roast weenies with the flames, Nothing lower on this earth than a worthless trailer trash whore

PLEASe do the sequel? From both their adventures?

That was really well written. I definitely could've done without the part where Sean sucked off James but the rest was awesome. Made me cum twice

if my wife ever did this i would set her on fire

What a great story with the perfect ending..so freaking 🔥 🔥🔥

neatly perfect until the gangbang setup as she never even fantasied about doing that. maybe should have invited James into their tent for a bim,mf night.

I am a limp clitty sissy who is a premi my wife needs men. This is is and Dennis or is and Jerry. I enjoy being a sissy but wish I had a real vagina and was a whore for a black biker gang. Bring a white faggot slave to a black gang would be nice too

Good story liked the way Jessica slowly seduces Sean into being a cockcold. Looking forward to reading the next installment.