by Omenainen
I would love to have been either of them. You handled it ALL very well, from back story to good dialogue and beautiful, hot sex, with good writing skills. Kudos and thank you for sharing!
Slow, steady, juicy - wonderful! I loved the way they both took it slow and careful and kind without losing any of the heat.
This story is well written. I'm not a fan of gay erotica but you did it well. What I like about your style is you don't just focus on the physical but also emotional side. Keep up the good work!
I agree with the other four comments — a really nicely crafted tale. It's a believable scenario, and as has been mentioned; you dove into the thoughts and feelings which reveal a whole other level of human experience. It's short and open-ended, but that just leaves the door open for more in these three character's future ;)
Hot. Again well written. If I ever have a experience like Tom, I’d want someone
Like Tix to guide me. Hot.
Very erotic hot sexual I want Tix to take me! Maybe it could go further with these three or something more with Tom and Tix. I love it.