All Comments on 'Survivors Ch. 04'

G....is this the end?. That's it? We don't know if they make it? Couldn't you have them find a place with water and safe place if they can stay and prosper? Well, I'm so happy Pike detoxed.

I am happy you submitted the remainder of your story but felt some parts were rushed. I do like this story so I still gave you a 5 but still...I am glad you fixed the issue with chapter 4 :)

TM

Unfortunately, this is the end, and yes it is rushed. This story was originally a cowriting project between myself and Kitten2010. She has since stopped writing on Literotica, and I had to wrap up the story as best I could with just myself. So sorry if it seemed half assed, I did the best I could under the circumstances and hope you all enjoyed it regardless!