All Comments on 'Susan's Needs'

Very nice story, BUT.....on page 2 of this story, you described that you and Susan are lovers, with the full approval of her mother ( MARY). You ended this story with another night of hot passion between you and Mary, but you've never gotten to the part where Mary becomes aware of the intimacy shared between you and Susan and how she came to accept it. C'mon Ben JaCnov.....don't leave a brotha hangin like that. Bridge the gap and finish the story already, would ya?

Patience grasshopper. Chapter two is coming shortly. There might even be more chapters as the story develops.

Very nice story! Looking forward to reading more of your writings

Hot story but the revelation about the step daughter and the MC being lovers was a subtle as getting hit in the face with a brick.