by dawn1958
I really thought it was hot. I like seeing women dominate women ;and the dominant woman being subjugated was excellent.
fantastic.awsome incredible.one of the very best non concent / reluctance stories in literotica.excellent top notch story like this needs 20+chapters.read the story 1-4 so many times i have pretty much memorized it all.I love this story.
Jay's reaction was a big let down. What is the point of the blackmailing again, if the husband isn't going to become angry?? I've seen some blackmailing stories that turn like this and it makes the whole point mute... Why bother?
Come on, why wouldn't she tell the whole truth? It seems that cuckold Jay would not be bothered with it, heck he will likely want to "watch" it... LOL!!
Hot story. The only real thing that spoiled it for me was the unnatural feel of speech at times (ie. I am instead of I'm). I'm assuming that english isn't your first language.
I would like to read another chapter with Jay involved with Sandy and Juli. I would like Jay to take control Susan, and then use this control to have Sandy and Juli and any othe woman they can bring into the web.
Jay is for JERK why any man wants his wife to screw other men is beyond me!
I understand whyshe toned down what happened you kept writing she permitted or allowed when in fact she had no say in the debauchery, there`s no doubt she was a willing participant despite denial. Which means the story was in the wrong category NON CON NO WAY!
Despite that, the poor spellng and grammer, I think I still enjoyed it