All Comments on 'Susie Cleans Up'

Welcome to Literotica and thank you for a great story, especially for a first one. I hope you will write lots more excellent stories like this and share them all with us!

Where does the line start for a shave? Very nice please continue.

Loved the new story...especially how he casually watched her while she was cleaning and the special mentholated lotion...nice touch! I'd clean house for you any day!

Oh my that was delicious! You are an excellent writer! You built the tension and the action was described so perfectly, not too effusive and not to crude. Just right!

I look forward to more of your offerings, particularly those involving the Professor, or other men like him.

I must say that I really enjoyed this. I would luv to give a shave this good (I have provided a few over the years, but NEVER this good)

It was erotic and exotic - look forward to many more.