All Comments on 'Suspension Day 00'

by Thundertickler

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
This is the wrong category

There is nothing BDSM about this story. This is clearly in the wrong category and should be in Nonconsent. This sounds more like horror to me as the girl is being tortured

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Wrong category : this is non-consent, not BDSM

This story is in the wrong category. This is rape, not bdsm.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Please fact check your character description

Your character description of her being 4'10 tall and 60lbs put her squarely in the "absolutely emaciated, should be dead" category of weight.

One Google search can help prevent little mistakes likes this in the future.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Can’t wait for more

This is a really good story, needs a bit of work, but overall the story is really good. I really like how the principal is teaching Miko a lesson, and the fact that her mom and her aunt will be joining in as well it’s so hot, can’t wait for more!

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