All Comments on 'Suzette and Cristina'

Really liked the story but you kept getting the names mixed up.

I still really liked it though...quite original in it's premise (compared to other stories I've read on here).

5 Stars and a Favourite

I love the scenario and story, so perverted and kinky. Much enjoyed reading.

5 stars for that, despite the editorial issues. I think you might consider rewriting and reposting with corrections. The story is so good, it's a shame to leave it like it is, and I'd love to read a follow-on. Suzette and Cristina are rea stars.

A bit confused because in the first paragraph you say you were dressed in pink stockings then when you’re told to stand in front of Mistress, you say she pulled down your pantyhose.

Might want re-proofread to get the names straight