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Anonymousabout 4 years agoTypos are pretty irritating - just read it once over and you'll pick up on most of them.
Anonymousabout 4 years agoWanted to give 5 stars
...but could not. Too many typos. More than one sentence was nonsensical due to typos. But having said that I enjoyed the story, keep going.
UltimateHomeBodyabout 4 years agoNot just the anons. The story has great promise, you need to proof read it. So many incorrect words and typing mistakes. Learn usage of lie and lay.
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