by jonniboi
I love blowjob stories as I've a bit of a fetish for receiving them myself. Great work. Write more. I'd like to read the story about meeting Suie's mother.
I had fun writing it. I think it's pretty decent for my first time. It's the first ANY kind of story I've written since I was a kid.
I don't mind public comments.
Would love to get some from fellow writers.
jonniboi
I am going to echo the sentiments of the other guy when I say I have a fetish for getting head myself, please expand on this story, you have a lot of talent for this type of writing, please continue to use it.
That was a decent adequate story. Not too fucked up, except that mother part, but it was enjoyable, etc. Well done.