All Comments on 'Swallow Our Cum!'

Very hot, very creative. I liked the way all the characters were well delineated; not an easy feat. Good job!

NO MORE

Awesome, more more.

I had read some of your work somewhere else, and I'm glad I finally found you again. I extremely like your lit!!

I was hard from the first paragraph on. Great story. What happens next?

What a wonderful idea-----swallow cum!!!

I liked when she spit the cum in his face. That was so nasty and mean. Those two things get me going: nasty and mean. Ernesto is perfect.

Will there be more to this story? I thought it was written really good.

It was time to show the public the new me.All in black corset thong stockings sheer top short red skirt red heels.Wig full make up bright red lips and nails.Off to the adult theater to find my first load of cum.I walked around passed booths with glory holes.Passed padded tables and benches with chairs.Me sucking cocks and one fucking another cross dresser.As i walked passed a booth a pair of hands grabbed me pulling me in .pushing me to the floor pushing his cock deep in my mouth and down my throat.He started to fuck my throat and mouth.He told me i was a good girl and he was going to feed me loads of his cum for me to swallow.He filled my throat mouth with loads of cum.

A very nice story, about a fantasy weekend with six diverse people. I like short stories like this, with lots of sucking and fucking in nearly each paragraph!

To long