by Asperger27
Will this be another one of those stories where the bullied son has no spine and will never defend himself? There are 100s of these stories here, I would like to see a comeback or revenge for once where Daniel ends up sleeping with the two moms instead
Interesting story so far, but need to more watchful of details. For example, Sarah was able to call the hospital and have them come over to take Connor away within in just a few minutes, but it took Cynthia more than an hour to drive to the hospital to visit him.
Chapter 2 is much better than the first. Cynthia should get more and more corrupted as she is already down that path - maybe a new edgy haircut, tattoos, piercings, change of wardrobe. You can easily make Cynthia slowly become just as despicable as Connor.
Daniel and Sarah, on the other hand, knowing the truth can fall in love, but still in secret. In the end, maybe Cynthia and Connor meet a bad end, like her being pregnant and them both being arrested. Zoey goes to Sarah and Daniel somehow.
Very interesting story, but you should proofread it before posting to catch the inconsistencies.
A fantastic story you will be amazing if this date as they was . He gets released from the mental ward and checking his mobile He sees the videos He needs revenge and so he fucks it the mother sees very willing to do it because She went over to the house to talk about it and upon going round the back because she was not answer she saw them have been sex he was filled with anger and jealousy and she also wanted revenge.
A few months later there was an electrical storm and their parties ended up going back the craziest thing is at that same time both women found out that they were pregnant.