All Comments on 'Swapping Positions'

by Carl_Bradford

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Joe_Doe_StoriesJoe_Doe_Storiesalmost 4 years ago
Love the magical twist!

An interesting magical twist in the role reversal concept I enjoy so much. Very well written and suspenseful, and erotic as well. Nice work!

ZZchromosomeZZchromosomealmost 4 years ago

I was NOT expecting that. Until the twist, I was thinking some sort of legal loophole catching them, but body swap works just fine. Looking forward to more adventures! Might want to add a gender-bender tag, too.

orflash64orflash64almost 4 years ago
Great Story

Interesting plot. Never considered that plot twist, very original. What's your next slave story? Another chapter to this one or something new?

mul717ud35mul717ud35almost 4 years ago
Loved it. More please!

Didn't imagine this is where the story would go but loved it. I'd very much like to read more about this story and see how it could develop - otherwise I think the brutal slaver got away too lightly.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Add the part in which they swap back because I would like to see the male soul dominate rather than a female soul transfer to a male body that does the dominating.

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