All Comments on 'Swarnima Ch. 01'

Thanks viz. Well written. Good development. Sexy and sensual. Many thanks. Cheers.

I understand and empathize with her. I live with a wonderful but impotent (prostate removal) husband who loves me so much he allows me to fuck another man who is a long-time business partner with him. I crave being fucked often and hard, and I love my husband greatly. Great story.

Wow .. loved it .. nicely written.. good details. And yes.. it surely made me sooo soo wet :-)

Thank you for writing. Hope to read further of the adventure in the resort.

Nisha

I loved the language but there was a sense that the woman gave in far too easily. Should have been a bit of refusal leading to give in would have been nice. Good work by the way.

Loved every bit of it. The build up too. Keep writing more. Wish I could have the same experience 😍

This is great (as usual....!) but please continue the Sarayu Aunty series yaar......... you have just left us hanging there

the character, Swarnima, sounds sensual. hope you could have put her photo if it is inspired by someone real you know. loved it, the woman knows how to explore her sensuality.

You did a great job bringing out "Swarnima" for all of us to enjoy rather than her husband keeping her to himself. She sounds yummy, desirable. And your description is spot on, narrative erotic and loved it. Waiting for more of her

Mmmm mmm Swarnima is sweet, sexy & slutty.

Loved her. Well written. Wanna read more of her.

She known to you?

Vizmaster......a vey well written story, loved the character and the visuals you build up......am glad its chapter 1. a woman like her deserves to be written more about. waiting for the next episode

vizmaster.......Swarnima is so sexy and sensual......love that woman. and am jealous of her husband. If i was her husband i would have used that woman like crazy....

need to read more of her

Hello Author. Have read most of your stories but the character Swarnima...... Is by far the most intriguing. She sounds so sexual and much fun.

A beautiful story. I hope more chapters are on the way.

Where is part 2 Sir. Swarnima is good.