All Comments on 'Swati Ch. 06'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago

Nice- keep going.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
reaction

she gives him her bra, yet u write of her nipples being visible thru her translucent bra. excellent writing, teasing out the eroticism. waiting for your next instalment.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
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good writing......keep going

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Wonderful story

This is a wonderful story. Ths slow build up to the climax is exquisite. Please keep it up. I hope you continue to write for a long time.

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