All Comments on 'Swedish Delight Ch. 02'

Chapter 3, Hell ya

hell yes add another chapter or two! You are doing very well with your writing! Keep it up and

DON'T PAY ANY ATTENTION TO THE ANON COMMENTS! THEY ARE COWARDS AND ONLY TRY TO SPOIL THE FUN FOR EVERYONE ELSE!

Yes, it is good writing, though I think the story would benefit by a slower pace, with more build-up, tease, arousal and such. Looking forward to more!

Keep the chapters coming. Love it so far and can't wait to see what happens next. How will their parents react? I think they will join in the party.

great story, but no parent on child action, that just dosent seem as good

I like it. make a part three. but I don't really want the parents in on it. But hey, it's your story, and I'll read it no matter what you do.

make another one:D i love it!

You've already set it up to include the parents. I'd really prefer if you kept them out of it. It always seems so unrealistic and uninteresting when the parents become involved and it becomes a big orgy. Even involving the younger brother was a bit much for me. I would have loved it if you kept it between the girls, nice and romantic. But that's me, it's your story~ do what you want with it.

You should do it

I came right at the end. Good job

Yes but first of Matt fucking his twin sister's and his mom at the same time