All Comments on 'Sweet 18 Ch. 04'

the negative part of the chapter and that it has an ending. great story

Please write 2 more parts in 3ach parts how the boy gets fucked brutally by mom and sis and other family members and some rough hardcore assfucking for the boy

Great story! Judging from your previous work, I was kind of expecting more mother-son sex scenes, which would've been amazing, but I still enjoyed the series as a whole. Sad to see this end but at the same time curious and excited to see what you come up with for future stories/series in the same universe. Nice work! :)

Great story, hope it doesn't has a "surprise, the protagonist ends up being miserable and everyone hates him for no reason" ending like your previous story

“ Great story, hope it doesn't has a "surprise, the protagonist ends up being miserable and everyone hates him for no reason" ending like your previous story”

Well, I guess I’ve earned that level of skepticism, fair and square… But, yeah, when I do get back to young Terry (got some back story to go through, first), I plan for him to be living the good life!

My comment (the one you quoted) was supposed to be more of a comedic jab, but now that I re read it, it sounds way harsher than I intended, sorry

Tho I stand by my opinion that the twist at the end of that story was very unsatisfying and nonsensical, but this one seems far better already, keep up the good work!

Nice story, the excessive fear and panic and how the girls love his panic is kind of a turnoff reading the story but it is what it is. I do have some opinions, the main character should be a little more assertive or atleast be able to “talk”. All his dialogues were in his head, all his questions in his head. Not once did he question his grandma or mother stuff like, why did you hide everyrhing about the clan? Why havent i ever met my brothers and sisters? Also ask his mom why its already decided and he has 0 choice in the matter of his college.. and if it was decided from his birth that he would be forced to be a cocksleeve or that he really had a choice? I mean there was a moment where i really had to laugh, it was when his grandma said “since youve decided to commit to the clan” i was like wth did he have a choice to decide? His mom slapped him around until he didnt dare to talk and raped him afterwards, same like the grandma that told him shes going to have his ass and he has no choice in the matter. Poor wordplay when she acted like he did it out of choice when really he had no choice. Also this is apparently a recurring theme with futa stories where the male gets 0 blowjobs or actions, purely treated as a cocksleeve. I wouldve expected more from a “loving” family, atleast his mom gave him a bit sucking but it was skipped over. Its also mentioned the grandma needs him and wants to keep him happy because he can birth futas but so can she so why is he so important? I didnt get that part. Plus the way she impaled him wasnt really nice and she drank in his fear panic and sobbing instead of taking it slow and relaxing him soo she didnt want to be nice? Im assuming when she fucks she HAS to hurt the male but after she hurt him a bit she remembered she needed him so used all her willpower to take it a bit easier on him lol?

I just reread a bit and it was mentioned that his mom was also fucked by his grandma, maybe there will be some futa on futa action? Id like to read about that, not just abusing males. Also it was mentioned Sara is growing to be cruel like her grandmother, i hope thats for others and not her little bro. PS: apparently futa cocks grow after then teen period? Its said that Ursula was smaller when she fked Jessica and that Sara was still growing, futa genes? Then i hope the endgame at the research facility will allow Terry to use the futa genes on himself to transform into a futa without a pussy, or maybe partially, just gain the muscles and huge dick that they seem to have which will help in his mission to create/impregnate more futas

Weezyf: thank you for those notes. I did mean to imply that the Futanari could in no way be described as “nice”, and that hypocrisy you point out is absolutely a thing. In the story I’m working on now this is going to be put forward even more bluntly. There IS an endgame of sorts I’m aiming for, and I hope I can convey it more clearly than I have so far (…).

Terry has been very much aware of the expanded family, having gone to the annual retreat for all of his childhood (till that one traumatizing event in his teens). He was not let on on the deeper aspects of the clan, because as a male he needed to be initiated, first.

As for the genetics of making futa babies: when a “regular” woman is impregnated by a futa of the direct line, the baby has a 50% probability of being futa, but for most of the time she would not enjoy the superior physical attributes of the original line. Terry’s magic seed is expected to have a 100% success rate, with the added bonus of keeping the extra capabilities (which is something slightly-racist grandma is very excited about).

Hey author, a really hope that you can continue this story soon, in this 4 chapters you create the background to an amazing story, i hope that you can continue developing the story in the way a think you're going and don't forget to learn from the mistakes from your last story, and keep in mind "Weezyf" words, he is right with everything he said, is words from both comments are very contructive especially in that part he points that his family should be much more loving to Terry, after all he is special and unique and the only one who carries the perfect gene in his blood

Although I have some of the same feelings about the cruelty as Weezyf, I feel it is the authors prerogative to decide the background/characterization of the story. I have read plenty of stories where I did not agree with how the author chose to develop/continue. It doesn't make my opinion correct for anyone but me.

And Terry did have a choice. He knew what was coming, (maybe not as suddenly as it did) and was happy with it.

I do feel the "suggestion" of what is essentially raping underage children in other Futa families is something that wasn't needed, and would have been surprised it had made it past the moderators if I didn't already know how hypocritical their supposed standard is based on (many) other submissions to this site.

To the Anonymous commentor, i agree that EVENTUALLY at the end he was happy but troughout the story the author wrote him as panicky nervous unhappy traumatized wreck. I mean he was so traumatized that he never went on that annual vacation with his family.. he got scared shitless when his mom raped him for the initiation which i agree he shouldve seen coming and almost passed out from the choking of his sister because she wouldnt stop /let go of him, eventually he found a way to deal with it and liked it.. and uhm Ursula.. yeah he just had a conversation with her and the author kept stressing how scared and nervous he was i mean it was a bit unnecessary to be THAT scared during a conversation lol. Anyway it was his first day so lets he if he can grow up a bit and takes his dads advice and learns that he DOES hold a bit of power in his actions and wants/desires

You really had to make the grandmother a full on advocate for pedophilia didn't you? Jesus fucking christ dude, remove that entire part or remove this whole story. How is this even ALLOWED on this site?!

I wouldn't mind reading more of this!

Story was OK. Not the best futa story around. That story is titled "Futa House". Don't remember the author, but it is on Literotica. You can look it up. Still gave you 4 stars. Keep on writing. Will read you stories as they are published.

Didn't much care for this chapter. The other chapters were (mostly) fun futa family stuff while this one turned into stuff with futa ubermensch, genetics alteration, wanted pedophilia and way too much humiliation and cruelty.

The futa grandma was hot! She can take my ass too.

Wish you would write more of Terry and Sara. Really liked their dynamic

Wonderful story. Loved the way you told the story of Terry's day his family celebrating his coming of age. I have to smile when I think about what life will be like for him when he goes to college with all the futas around him. Bet he will not spend a single night alone in they have any thing to say about it.

Hey author. You did mention somewhere that you might continue this. At least finish out the weekend. Not good leaving things hanging.

Great story. I hope you continue with the series.

Great story. Would love to read more chapters. You have a very interesting world setting and very involving characters. Would love to see the sequence between the grandmother and the MC's father. It may be harsh, but it is also very erotic!

Too much rape, too little love!

Ursula needs to be reminded that while she resides within the boundaries of the United States, she is bound by the same laws that protect us.

I really want to see him go away from his GM and attend his choice of college.

It's sad that being bred. Y his family does nothing to enhance him. As the make of the line he deserves better outcome from his anointment