All Comments on 'Sweet and Sour Revenge for My LW'

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tangledweedtangledweedover 2 years ago

Wife shares pics of shaved pussy with lover, then comes home from convention. Three months later, husband questions her about the lack of hair and she says she just did it for him. In ninety days of regular sex, the subject of her bare naked beaver never came up?

TonyspencerTonyspencerabout 2 years ago

Lots of inconsistencies and the affair was too ridiculous to take seriously.

YouamiYouamiabout 2 years ago

I thought your tale was a great contribution to the BTB sub-genre... as a response to one of the commentators below I don't really think a follow-up from the cheating slut's perspective would add anything significant to this story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Should of been worse on the adulterers.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I liked the story, but didn't know where "Hunter" came from. Who was Hunter? David? The story itself could have used a proof reader or two to catch some of the spelling mistakes, and wrong word/tense usage. I don't understand why the husband waited another 3 months after the PI got all of the info and video they need for him to get custody, along with a payout from her company, especially since her boss and the CEO were doing her everyday. I'm surprised they didn't have multiple cameras in the room they were "meeting" in daily.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Much better, well done

IFAFILHGIFAFILHGabout 2 years ago

Loved it!! Cheating slut ehore got everything she deserved.. one of the best stories on Lit.. 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

3 suicide attempts and the stupid bitch still can't do it right??!

Some people are beyond help

IFAFILHGIFAFILHGabout 2 years ago

I love this ending... GREAT job !!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Lots of comments on the 3 months before burn but, hey, David did stop eating her pussy. Still screwed her, but that is kind of like getting a whore for free. No need to worry about STD in LW land.

tralan69ertralan69erabout 2 years ago

humorous

I found this story quite funny. Many of the comments were funny as well.

Too many serious people making stupid comments.

Keep writing and thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Pretty good entertainment. A story that is very often being lived. Many on the job affairs and when travel is involved it intensified 100 times. A large investment company a friend worked at described company functions as glorified orgies. Company had Apts in three major cities and was used every day as workers , most of the time higher ups to fuck coworkers. He described one of the female bosses as a gorgeous model type married e we it’s four kids as a woman who over the ten years he worked there has taken more dick than a porn star. He got his neighbor nephew a paid internship. The 20 year old fucked her teice a week but took her ass every time. The bragging going on also was crazy and he never could understand how none of them ever got caught.

DickSnugfitDickSnugfitabout 2 years ago

Quite a refreshing read after so many thoroughly irritating & infuriating silly forays into nonsense that seem as if written by wank-happy ten-year-old boys who have only just discovered how to masturbate productively with their "massive" Ten-Millimetre-Micro-Dickies, but not yet being confident, nor proficient enough, to actually fuck yet themselves, knowing that they would likely ejaculate long before getting a purchase on even their own grossly inadequate equipment let alone coming face to face with an actual real-life Vulva!

So the best their real life sexual experiences can hope to manage at this pubescent stage is to fuck vicariously through the real-life experiences of another, who can actually DO the job in hand and who knows, perhaps even perform a couple of pumps in-and-out, before making an embarrassing mess in his underwear!

This was a far better, more satisfying, and far more true-to-life (albeit with a tiny-touch of literary enhancement to the drama, as one would expect)!

The only criticism that I WOULD raise is that IMHO, the last paragraph is dreadfully WEAK, almost apologetic! Sorry, but this IS really damaging, as it almost undermines the whole emphasis, and therefore WEAKENS the whole message of just HOW catastrophic her caustic actions where, and how deep, wide and long-lasting the toxic ramifications of such behaviours can be, rippling through time, and distance.

Try instead, something to solidly anchor it- e.g.-

"Revenge was sweet, but no amount of retribution would ever fully heal David's wounds. He still loved Kim, and probably always would! But he could never LIKE her anymore, not now he had learned the bitter truth of just how far she was happily able to abandon all commitment, all responsibility, and delve headlong into the deepest depravity, sheer selfish perverted lust! How could he ever trust his girls into HER care?

No, he never could FORGIVE her betrayal of not only him but, her own twin baby daughters too!

How could she? Nor would he never forget. Even if he could find it in him to forgive her betrayal of his love and devotion, and to somehow overlook her sustained deceit and duplicity, every time he looked at the girls he would be reminded of how little weight her family had accounted for in the scale of things when push came to shove!

It would be years before David would love and trust anyone again. For his sins, there would always be a corner of him that loved Kim, but by her actions it had morphed into hate! SHE had done that to him! Deliberately! Not a "Flash-in-the-Pan", not a drunken-fumble, pissed-at-a-party, nor `a one-off moment-of-madness'. No, this was far more than any passing hormone-flush, this was a cold, calculated, concerted planned, premeditated &, extended Campaign, a couple of hours or more virtually every day for a year culminating in four days solid fucking, back-to-back, gabg-banged spit-roasted and swallowing!

He could never forget how deeply she had hurt him, nor how cold, calculating, and proficiently, she had lied to him

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

The roots of the story are really good, but your continuously slipping between first person, second person, and third person makes it somewhat difficult to follow.

sdthundersdthunderabout 2 years ago

Keep writing, this one was good, and I really enjoyed it, but you have the potential to turn out something really great...

Tiger27Tiger27about 2 years ago

Great story!

Don't worry about these shit birds. They pull the same crap all over the internet and social media.

Hope to see more from you Cindy!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Simply, I liked this. Thank you for writing. I realize that as a creator you have to make choices - and I'm sure the ones you made for this story will get you good reviews overall. Thank you.

juanviejojuanviejoabout 2 years ago

I THOUGHT IT WAS PRETTY GOOD...I GAVE YOU CINCO ESTRELLAS! (*****)

servant111servant111about 2 years ago

One of the most practical BTB stories that I have read on this site. Excellent job there CindyTV...you are one of the few that understand that a tightly organized tale with rousing action, good plot progression, heart string hooks, in depth characterization, and scenes that are firmly anchored in the real world that we all face make a excellent recipe for outstanding forays into this and future literary effort.

Again congratulations on an excellent effort! 5 well deserved stars.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Good writing, story moved well. BTB was thoroughly and appropriately devastating. A bit predictable but an enjoyable read.

Just a minor note: David was aware she was allowing other men to defile her body with semen, yet he continued using the very same orifices with no mention of his concern for disease or requiring extraordinary cleansing. Female authors often miss this, but in addition to the betrayal aspect, 'sloppy seconds' is a major element of the disgust a man considers when dealing with a cheating partner. A mention of this, either in concern or actions (i.e., condoms) would add an extra touch of reskism. Please keep writing!

MarkT63MarkT63about 2 years ago

Excellent BTB story!!! Kudos to you...

JerseyCaptainJerseyCaptainabout 2 years ago

Okay story, but he should have taken action earlier.

SexecutionerSexecutionerabout 2 years ago

Pretty good story, you have a better grasp on justice for betrayal than a lot of other writers on here do.

My only gripe is I wouldn't have touched her with a dead dog's dick after I found out about her being a slut.

wilsonanthonywilsonanthonyabout 2 years ago

You're a good writer and I would not worry about the naysayers. There’s ALWAYS room for improvement in any story. If this is your second attempt it is damn good. BTB is about the discovery, the confrontation and ultimately about the burning! And … you tick all the boxes!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I didn’t understand the last paragraph about Kim. Her family turned their backs on her, but she is nevertheless living in her mother’s basement, so they apparently haven’t completely cut her off? And how would their turning their their back on her cost her visitation rights?

I agree with the poster who commented that everything was so black and white, perfect, then terrible. Characters seemed a little one-dimensional.

But then I am most concerned about the murder threat. Five years isn’t a very long time to get over his grudge if this CEO is as much of a vindictive scum ball as the story suggests. That leaves us a long way from “everybody lived happily ever after.”

But these things can be fixed with practice and a good editor. Please keep writing.

john_sixfooterjohn_sixfooterabout 2 years ago

Very well done!

However... everything was rote, mechanical, without nuance or feelings. You're doing this in third person, which is simple to describe things, but you need to consider the character's feelings.

This story touched on the cheating wife feelings, but her pain, her anguish, her shock, her agony, the emptiness... just didn't ring genuinely.

You have talent. I suggest you wallow in the agony of your feelings. Then express your joy. Describe those feelings in words. Next time, write an outline, briefly describe what each character does, then describe their feelings. Then write your story...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

CindyTV .... Thanks for a "GREAT" BTB stoy!

To the CUCK degenerates AND "cheating WHORE wife Apologist" .... may you all BURN IN HELL!

Nothing better then a "GREAT" Burn The Bitch, cheating SLUT/CUNT/PIECE OF SHIT, TOTALLY DESTROYED, SLIMY, THREE HOLE BITCH .... DESPICABLE wife story!!!

BigfundrewBigfundrewabout 2 years ago

My only question is how did it take three months to "notice" the never shaved before bald pussy?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

A well written story. Has a satisfying ending.

Anallicker01Anallicker01about 2 years ago

Great story, great BTB! I don't understand why you dragged everything out so long! One & done is my opinion.

Heck, after the trade show & then the PI why drag it out longer? Oh well, you're the writer! LOL

Legio_Patria_NostraLegio_Patria_Nostraabout 2 years ago

Great story!!! Too many writers let the bosses and CEOs of these companies get away with workplace sexual harassment and downright criminal predatory behavior. That's when reality takes a holiday, and I go find something else to read. Rather than working as a day laborer, more humiliating would be a job in his chosen field of tech, demoted to an hourly worker in a 5' x 5' cubicle. Speaking of the number 5... 5+++/5!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Nice job, great story! Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Got what they deserved, nicely done! How can anyone say, "I love you with all my heart" while having sex with someone else? Clearly a stunted, immature understanding of the word. So selfish, glad she was burned by her choices!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Okay, l’ll freely admit I am a psychopath, to the degree that my closest acquaintances have not a clue.

I love this writer, in spite of the horseshit crossdressing crap, but that’s what makes him/her what he/she is. Always, without exception, give the bastards plenty of slack in the rope you’ve tightly wound around their necks.

miket0422miket0422about 2 years ago

I am curious to how Kim got started screwing her boss in the first place. We find out it had been going on for 6 months before David found out but, never a word about how it all got started after her being a "perfect" wife for so many years.

40fathoms40fathomsabout 2 years ago

Learning to really enjoy your postings. Another great story thanks for your efforts

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

"she couldn't lose him over this." As if ita some tiny bump? She was a cold conniving heartless bitch. Full willingly to spread her legs and tell bold face lies. Nope she gets everything and deserves to live alone. Maybe the next crazy cat lady.

MormonJackMormonJackabout 2 years ago

Like others, I really have come to appreciate your stories. Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Absolutely love it BUT a shame these women just do not understand the hurt and sorrow that they cause everyone else that is not at fault Keep up the good work Cindy

pummel187pummel187about 2 years ago

as Billy Joel put it .... "she's always a woman to me" lol Classic : )

alvinjfrazieralvinjfrazierabout 2 years ago

I loved the story, gave it 5stars. But, most places where you used ”weeks", put "days"; compact most of the timeframe. His anger, the evidence, professional PI, professional attorney; no of the events should have taken that long.

Boyd PercyBoyd Percyabout 2 years ago

Interesting story!

4

bobareenobobareenoabout 2 years ago

The author set it up fairly well, but lost the opportunity for a great confrontation between husband and wife. Hubby had all the evidence, why not continue as he had, slowly making her eat her words as the pictures, then videos came out, so that he could hear her rationalizations for her actions, so that the readers could see inside her head, make her explain herself. She claims to love him. How could she do that? It would be interesting to hear a rationale beyond, “I never thought you’d find out.” Hubby here was inarticulate, and wife never faced her lies head on, she was given consequences, but the consequences left the catharsis of the direct discussion and confrontation off the table.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

As unsettling as the usual stories are, with the wife gradually seduced or beginning on her own to look outside the marriage while increasingly pulling away from her husband and children, I at least find them believable. This woman is incredibly manipulative and has no conscience. I suppose there are some number of psychopaths or sociopaths who might behave this way, but I can’t think they’re all that common.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Basic bitch is what Kim is. She cheated because she could, it 'excited' her. She is a simple cake eater. Even when shit hit the fan, her loyalty was still more towards her lovers than her husband. Her suicide attempts have NOTHING to do with the real regret and guilt that hurting others brings. No, her suicide attempt is more basic bitch stuff. She's not happy because people don't like her anymore. It's that simple. She wants validation and positive attention. She also hates doing hard work, and made little to no effort to win her husband back. Her family turned their back on her, her husband greatly dislike her, her daughters probably aren't fond of her right now, her career took a massive hit, and her overall reputation is in shambles. THAT is the only reason someone like her would be suicidal. Life got hard, and she's too soft to handle it.

Is it possible a duplicitous and self centered basic bitch like Kim....could theoretically feel actual remorse? Of course. But that would take a very long time. Her programming to serve herself runs deep. She had an easy life, and controlled everyone for a very long time. The hard work required to make amends and to look deep within herself to find answers and redemption is a very long/hard road. And her three suicide attempts tell me she's hardly trying. Just hoping to end the new hard road she's made for herself.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Enjoyed the story very much. Please keep up the great work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

What. Great BTB story.

I couldn’t help but think they got only what they deserved. I have a hard time believing that a wife could behave like that after many years of being the person she was

Bill S.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Loved the story! Great job! keep them coming. I'd love to read one from you where a wife testifies against her husband in a civil trial. She actaully stretches the truth to make her husband look incompetent. It's her desire to help his business partner come out looking better. She has always had feelings for the partner but has never acted on them. She doesn't want to divorce her husband but just wants to help her husband's partner. This disrespct is earth shattering for the husband. She does not understand how hurtful this is to her husband. The level of disrespect and betrayal is something he can not over look. What do you think?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Definitely a narcissistic disdociative disorder to tje the ponit of collusion in a conspiracy to have him murdered.

She is delusional that she could keep her marriage.

Charges against her would be infidelity, where statute allowed, conspiracy and conspiracy to commit muder; this is treated on the same basis as 1st degree homicide with a minimum sentence of 5 years to life.

Here husband would ZERO sentence mitation influence. This is a capital crime that, once filed as such, is strictly controlled by the judicial system. She is convicted by her words on tape.

So, a GOOD story but would have been better in incorporating the above.

As for the boring, recurrent, trope, "I still love her", is NOT true. What he still loves is the image of a women he thought he loved before he discovered her real self was revealed. This false displacement is common in divorced men, was for me, and once understood and accepted makes a huge step in recovery. My psychologist, in connection with this, asked me a simple question. Is the woman you know today would be someone you would date?" Also, are her actions of late those she would have taken when first married?" Knowing those answers made it easy to understand I was married to a narcissistic who did not love me. It got easier after that and I was truly over her in 6 more months.

ESSENTIAL TO GO NO CONTACT!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Great story WHY oh WHY do so many women who have everything cheat and lie for just a bit of strange ????

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Kim sounds just like Amber Heard on the witness stand: “I didn’t fake any of my bruises”! Lmao!

Excellent story.

Buster2UBuster2Ualmost 2 years ago

Great Writing, she sounded so hot I don't know that I could have given her up. Even after all the cheating and lying.

AlanDavidAlanDavidalmost 2 years ago

Great BTB, too bad the bosses lived. They could have at least been gang raped in prison. 5 years is hardly a sentence. But I enjoyed the read. You have a vivid imagination.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Cindy- Girlfriend- You hit a home run! 5 stars!

TriCoastalTriCoastalalmost 2 years ago

That's a serious conflagration. 5*

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Kept switching perspectives. Four stars anyway.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I remember a conversation I had with my dad, when I was starting out on my own. He said” I don’t want your life to be too hard, but I don’t want it to be too easy either” . The point is, that success without struggle, is worthless. It breeds a type of person who somehow feels superior to the people they employ, and treat those under them with disdain. Because, they never had to earn anything. The boss in this story, was an entitled SOB. He felt superior to everyone around him, which gave him the right to fuck a married woman. In the story “ the bridge”, it is brought up by the husband, as he destroys the boss and his business, that too many people feel that those in higher positions than themselves, have achieved that greatness, because of some undefined qualities. When in truth, they were born with a gold spoon in their mouth. when you rip away the facade, the truth stares you in the face. 5 stars, for hubby not giving in, to the Aura of the superior rich male, trying to ruin his life. Nobody is better than you. More lucky perhaps , or born into a better position. That’s it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Cindy you give us very good reads. That said I have a major problem with, not you, but damn near every writer on this site.

That problem is this: "BUT I STILL LOVE HER!" Come writers, think just truely foolish that sounds. Only a solid cuck would feel that. He knew, from unguarded words from her own mouth, what a vile slut she was and how much contempt she had for him.

So, how would any rational man, actual feel love for her?

In my opinion what is really happening is that he is in love with the illusion of what once was and not the now.

Also, he played a drawn out sadistic camel not that I blame him-for weeks.

Why? Once he had the proof why draw things out. You paint him as a decisive man.Why would he choose torture himself.

Just saying that ya'll should dump the trophs: I still love her; you need closure; all women are 34 Ddd and the guys have 9" dicks 2-3 in diameter; can't get divorced because if the children; refusing to be transparent with friends and familycabout her adultery.(That's a fictitious "taking the high ground" move. Everyone will know soon in any case, right. The guy always leaves the house. Why?

If these are discarded you all have enough talent and imagination to write great stories.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Why dislike.?!

Going on too long And then he went with another 3 months when had everything almost immediately!!!

Played wimpy cuckold when should have faked injury etc instead of simply taking sloppy seconds so long. Love, Trust and Respect. Bullshit

Lost all

GuyfromShadesGuyfromShadesalmost 2 years ago

I do not know about everyone else, but I enjoyed this story. Thanks for your writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Wife was sad and suicidal because her status was in the trash. Even when she was served divorce papers, she was still batting for her affair partners. I understand that’s her bread and butter. But if she loved her family as much as she mouthed over n over again, it’s a no brained to quit the company that tempted her desires to begging n with. You dump the affair partner immediately. That’s the first and most important step to any REAL repentance. She didn’t end the affair on her own. She didn’t end the affair when her husband caught her red handed playing kissed face and grab ass. And she kept allegiance after being served divorce papers. She has burned all her bridges and every single shoddy rope her husband threw at her. She’s only sorry that she has no avenue back to being a cake eater. People like her need jailers to behave. Too impulsive and selfish. She would need years of therapy. And her husband is just one man trying to raise two girls. She’s on her own. She’s lucky her mom gave her a basement. Most people with that level of mental illness burn all their connections and live destitute. It’s actually really sad how many mentally I’ll people self destruct and Poison is heir support network.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Wonderful story! If nobody wants Kim around, it's her fault. If she's attempted suicide, and nobody cared, she did it to herself.

Merlin_the_MagicianMerlin_the_Magicianalmost 2 years ago

I’ve read several of your stories about loving wives and I don’t understand why you say that people have been hard on you. I’ve enjoyed what I’ve read so far. Sure, there are some grammatical errors that could be corrected by using a good editor ( use a good one). There is a list of editors in the main page of Literotica.com that you can call on. I don’t read your transgender stories because I’m not politically correct but I do like your other stories where men are men and do that right thing. The “right thing” being what I did when my wife of four year decided she wanted to experiment with her girl friend and another man though not together. I too, forgave, but never forgot until I found out she had died. It’s easier to forget when they’re dead. Might be the basis for a good story for you? Good Luck with your writing. MtM

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Decent story, but that whole "still loved Kim and forgave her" always puzzles me. How can there be love without loyalty or trust ? Betrayal trumps any "love" you might have, unless you confuse "infatuation" for love.

Long ago, I dated on-again, off-again someone whom I thought I knew. I knew she dated others, and that did not bother me. Until I found out she was repeatedly dating, and getting intimate with a married man who was not separated from his wife. That ended my respect for her, and our friendship, she was in my rear-view mirror instantly. "A callous disregard" trumps any affection I might otherwise have for people.

RanDog025RanDog025almost 2 years ago

Very well done Cindy. Others could learn from you. Thank you for not displaying some of the very bad habits presented to members with the terrible misuse of the ole dot dot dot stories. Of the tens of thousands of manuscripts presented while at my desk, I've not witnessed it like I have here. Again, sorry that one of your fetishes are Coukolding, such a shame! 5 BIG FAT BLAZING STARS!

dgfergiedgfergiealmost 2 years ago

A good BTB and everyone involved story of revenge and payouts. When you have money you may not be able to buy happiness but you can buy your own brand of misery!

Helen1899Helen1899almost 2 years ago

You have the ability and imagination to become one of the best authors on lit. ( not hard many would say) but before that can happen, don't fall into the awful scenario of involving the parents and siblings in the sins of their daughter and sister, what have they done to be hurt like that, its an evil thing to do and it ruins the story for many of us. Come on your better than that, you don't need to do it, the story didn't need it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Woman all crave, and love attention. Women are drawn to Men who have money, and are powerful. Most however, if in a loving relationship with a loving husband and family, can fight the urge to act on these impulses. Even though the social restrictions on being a wanton slut have lifted, society still looks down on women who purposely ruin their family, for a thrill. If you talk to any newly divorced woman, the conversation will go one, of two ways. If she caught him cheating, he is a despicable dog, that is only capable of thinking with his dick. If she got caught cheating, he was “ inattentive, distant, didn’t value her, unsupportive, never there for her( while he worked 60 hours a week, to support her in the lifestyle she wanted) not spontaneous or passionate. By the time she is done trashing him, she could have been pulling trains every week with the entire high school football, team, and most people would think she was a saint!

I remember a acquaintance of my wife, we met at the gym. She was going thru a divorce. Did the typical bullshit women do, to paint hubby in a negative light. My wife felt sorry for her. After we left, I asked a few pointed questions.

1. Who asked for the divorce? “She did.”

2. Did one of them cheat?” I don’t know”. ( This is woman speak, for I don’t want to tell you the answer)

3. Who has custody of the house, and her child? “The husband.”

4. What was the reason for her divorcing him? “I think part of it was, he wouldn’t go work out with her. She needed more out of the relationship”

It took me only 15 minutes, to paint another reality of her situation, for my wife. Why would a good mother leave her husband and child, unless she was a wanton slut? My wife never directly agreed with my line of reasoning, but she did cut off interaction with the woman. Woman have become equal to men, much more than 100 years ago. But until they are treated in a divorce, the same as a man, and called out for their actions the same, the equality women seem to value so much, is just a sham. As my wife once told me” we want to be equal, when it suits us”. And that’s, the truth. 5 Stars.

MountainMan1336MountainMan1336almost 2 years ago

I enjoyed reading about his revenge. I gave it 5 stars. I had a cheating wife, and before going into the court room my attorney told me. "This is the state of Vermont, here if you have a penis you have already lost your case in family court." And he was right ! I lost everything house, vehicles, 401K and I had visits with my children twice a month. That was over 20 years ago. Now at the age of 65 years old, I am still working trying to get things in order. A young man who works in the same mill I do announced he was getting married, I just looked at him and asked " What are you? Stupid? no woman is worth that!!!"

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Helen1899, you are a bloviated mouthpiece, full of shit.

How did the slut become a slut? Always start with the parents, who likely never disciplined their wild child. They need to know of their failure as parents, and likely need a,reason as,to,why that translates to their being remarkably poor examples for their. grandchildren, whom they will never visit, unless, having reached majority, they choose to dumpster dive into their maternal family and ex-mother.

And remember, asswipe, that this has become a legal issue, and all involved deserve a heads up to what will be public information, including the depths of depravity of which all of the cheaters can be proud. Your militant feminist slip is showing, and it’s yellowed with age.

Elias1Elias1over 1 year ago

Keep writing your BTB stories... I gave you five stars

Norseman123Norseman123over 1 year ago

Love your stories keep them coming.

6King6Kingover 1 year ago

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

inka2222inka2222over 1 year ago

4.5 stars. Would be nice if he found a replacement (not easy for protagonist, easy for the writer). Just a short epilogue to raise to 5 stars.

redboat7redboat7over 1 year ago

Another Great Story. Loved It!! Thanks..

NicealloverNicealloverover 1 year ago

What a good story. I would have tried reconciliation instead of mental illness. It would be a tremendous challenge but doable.

Helen1899Helen1899over 1 year ago

Second reading. The point i made with my first comment still stands. A good promising author lets herself down by hurting close family who have done nothing wrong. Also he should have tried to help Kim by organising supervised meetings with the twins.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great story, but I would have brought Kim to live in the my basement as my fuck slave, chained down there to never be allowed to leave the basement..

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Well written and a real pleasure to read your story. top scores

xhristianjxhristianjover 1 year ago

I'll admit I read this because I love Sweet and Sour and I enjoy a good revenge story. Personally I have to wonder if your wife cheats on you and I don't mean a random hook up were all human afterall but a full on affair? Why would any husband feel bound by their marriage vows or to abide by the ruling of some liberal family dispute court?

I mean for me fucking the wife over financially makes a hell of a lot of sense seeing as we're not allowed to seek revenge against her or her lover physically?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

THIS WAS ONE OF THE BEST STORIES I HAVE RAD IN THIS GENRE. THANK YOU...FIVE STARS!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

KIM KNEW DAVID WAS A STUPID CUCK HENCE SHE PLAYED HIM WITH THE TRADE SHOW!!

AS ALWAYS, YOUR MALE CHARACTERS ARE WEAK WIMP CUCKS WHO DON'T REVEAL THEIR EVIDENCE AND DON'T URN THE BITCHES

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

KUDOS....SEEMS YOU FINALLY UNDERSTAND WHAT BTB MEANS°

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Cindy, this was 5 stars. Why? Because the husband destroyed wifey’s support network. This is the only way, you come out on top in a divorce. Win, the spin.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

5 stars for this. Payback is sweet and the level can only be determined by the one wronged. Only thing to change and it is a small item. Why continue to risk your health by still fucking the whore once you found out. You have kids to think of. Is the waiting game really worth the risk of getting a disease. More than one way to put sex off. To bad she failed 3 times.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

A greater melodrama hath no woman writ.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Actually 4.5 STARS.

Please let me suggest two things that will, I believe, tighten up your story.

FIRST, referring to this quote from the story:

" would never have thought of looking at any of her personal things, but after last night my trust would never be the same. I had to protect the girls and save our marriage if possible.

Fortunately, the girls kept me busy and my mind off my crashing marriage.."

POINT 1: There is no marriage to save. He said so earlier. POINT 2: It is not rational, or perhaps, sane, to possess the feeling,,"I still love her." He can certainly love the illusion of what she once was but no one could like, trust or love a sexual sociopath. Nearly every LW writer uses that and doing so is foolish. Third POINT: Does anyone really believe he'd intercede on her sentence, or even could? Conspiracy to Comite Murder is a FELONY charge brought by the city or State and the issue rolls out according to those legal quidelines.

These are three, foolishly overused tropes that damage a good story when there is no need for it.

Last point. THIS WAS A GOOD STORY!

Keep at it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I loved the story and rewarded it with what it deserved.

But I just can't understand that knowing his wife has became a corporate slut, how could David wait and act as loving husband let alone sex with her.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Good story with a satisfying ending. His revenge was played for the “long game” not to satisfy his hurt pride.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Not a happy story, but, certainly well written and well worth reading.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

wifey should have spent some time in the slammer, like the other commenter mentioned. And I am getting tired, of all the fked over husbands, interceding on wifeys behalf to help her. Besides that, a pretty tight story. Gave it 5 stars.

RePhilRePhilover 1 year ago

You are a great writer your stories are easy to read and flow beautifully. Just the right balance between narration and dialogue. Thanks for sharing and putting yourself out there time after time. Cheers

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

BTB stories are always so toxic. While I understand that reading them may provide some glee to burned or agreived men, and stroke the old mysogyny nerve, I always feel so down after reading one. I'm obviously a fellow reader, so I guess I should just stop reading. Loving wives is such a weird part of Literotica, a vile stew of cheating, remorse, revenge, cuckoldry, humiliation. etc.etc. And many many femdom bdsm stories are just as bad. I've been reading literotica for three years now. I thought it was"better" than porn, lol. What an idiot. peace bros.

PBD2022PBD2022over 1 year ago

Lust and cheating resemble animalistic emotions. It can be only stopped with severe painful consequences. That is BTB group is very satisfying. Good job on this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

BTB stories are toxic because cheating is toxic, a fitting punishment for the crime is fair. Men standing up for themselves and burning their cheating sppuse and lovers isnt misogynistic its also fair. Best story on this website and a real reminder that even the best wife in the world could be a scummy cunt.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

As Randy Savage says , “ slip inside a slim Kim “ It’s almost as though Slim Kim has multiple personality disorder, with her ability to lie off the cuff and her total lack of remorse before being caught makes it hard to believe she could be so brazenly perverse and deceitful while still acting the perfect wife and mother . That’s a psychopath or sociopath I would think . 5 stars and a huge thanks for the entertainment

MarkT63MarkT63over 1 year ago

Excellent BTB story!!!

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