All Comments on 'Sweet Day Dream'

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ArlyanaArlyanaalmost 14 years ago

it was very well written and very good thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
that's it?

That's it? tis is obvoiusly fantasy, not reality. sorry babe

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Good for a first one

Not bad for a first story...

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
nice

alittle more foreplay was needed.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
sweet day dream

not bad at all. i would have used a little more detail though. how about a sequel?

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